tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2990519113416070511.post7275647334325457685..comments2007-11-14T12:56:31.203-08:00FUNKMANhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01186547168700987735noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2990519113416070511.post-26413319728853693722007-11-14T12:56:00.000-08:002007-11-14T12:56:00.000-08:00Okay, first of all, natural curiosity has gotten a hold of me...Is this a true story? One that you experienced? <BR/>Second, I think that your blogs definitely have merit! I can tell that it is issues or experiences that are close to you. ROCK ON! <BR/>Lastly, I won’t totally critique your writing (too much), other than to say a good start would be to write it in Microsoft Word or Works for spelling and grammar errors. Also, check your quotations. You have one sentence starting with a “ but closing with a ‘. I would send you more detailed info if you like it, but I have to have your e-mail address first.<BR/>Keep it up with the creativity and feeling though! That really shines through and I think that is what is important. <BR/>Have a good one! BTW, it was great seeing you back in ScoBlo! Take care!LisaNhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06892915991567233029noreply@blogger.com